I added a new page to my blog. For Love or Brains is my first draft for the short screenplay I wrote for Script Writing class. Read if you wish your eyes to bleed.
I like it, but the poor kitty! :( Besides that I think it's funny, don't handfeed the homeless! :P I think it would be funnier if rather than pulling her head away from Brent's shoulder when he tries to bite her, she just reached up and smacked him without looking away from the TV, but the fact that she just notices at the last minute and is not yet that adept at dodging his noms sets up the ending better.
Oh, and every time I read your character Alex's lines I imagined them with Alex's voice and accent and everything XD
Haha! nice. I did too. I want her to play my Alex if this horror actually gets made. And I was going to have her smack him away without really reacting much, but I changed the ending to this one.
"Grrrr, Arg!"
ReplyDeleteI geek'd out when I read those words >w<
I like it, but the poor kitty! :( Besides that I think it's funny, don't handfeed the homeless! :P I think it would be funnier if rather than pulling her head away from Brent's shoulder when he tries to bite her, she just reached up and smacked him without looking away from the TV, but the fact that she just notices at the last minute and is not yet that adept at dodging his noms sets up the ending better.
Oh, and every time I read your character Alex's lines I imagined them with Alex's voice and accent and everything XD
Haha! nice. I did too. I want her to play my Alex if this horror actually gets made. And I was going to have her smack him away without really reacting much, but I changed the ending to this one.
ReplyDeleteI just found this, figured you'd get a kick out of it :P
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